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Am acord de la Bizarre^Punk....

This fic is in english totaly...hope you will understand what I'm tryin' to say...

So the story starts like this:
A girl,that is 16 years old,leaves in Romania,she has two brothers,her mother divorced when she was 3 years old,and now she is leaving with her fater that marryed when she had 6 years old.Her brothers are leaving with her biological mother.Her biological mother is a bitch,she doesn't love her at all,and her brothers don't feel either her love,she leaves for money,for fame,for sex,anything but not for love and to be loved.After the girl's father she was marryed once.
The girls name is Johanna.

After a terrible night,with lots of tears,Johanna wakes up.
She goes tot the bathroom,then she takes her breakfast and goes to school.While she was walking to school she was dreaming,she was imagining and was talking to an invisible person that doesn't exist in real life,well not really,the person exists but is far far away from her.Outside was very cold,and the fog was down on the streets.The girl was dressed only in black,on her face you can guess the pain,the sadness and the hate.She has no friends,she is alone,everyone thinks that she is a monster.They are afraid of her,they think if she is listening rock she is the devil in person.Sometimes she scares everyone only doing a "boo"...When she is crossing the hallway everyone makes enough place to cross thru the lot of people.Even the teachers are afraid of her,so she has big grades but she does not even learn,not even a little.
The rumor that she is a princess of darkness appeared when her friend discovered something that scared her,discovered thet she was a vampire.But of course not everyone believed it.She was a diffrent kind of vampire,she could see the light,but not all the time,only when she wanted.
so one day when she thought that everything was over,she left home,but with a few money,she ran in Germany,and bought a castle,an old one,that needed to be renovated,so the owner asked for too few money,so she was able to buy it,she got a job and tryed to handle by herself,but the castle was so big,that she couldn't afford to make it new.So she had to live in hard conditions.The castle was big,and old,almost five hundred years.After two years of hard working she had enough money to renovate the first and the second floor.She discovered lots of secret doors,hidden doors.
When she was walking in the park she met a boy,a boy like her,that didn't thought that was weird,or a princess of darkness,she was natural for him.So she brought him at her castle.He was inlove with her,so she was too.
They went in her room,and she wrote some lyrics:

"For once upon a time,a dark soul,
Wanted its pair,
But it couldn't find it...
So it took a body,
She was a DRUG,his drug...
A Nymphetamine girl..."

These are her lyrics....
And his......

"On the lake negru swans are walkin' thru the surface,
In my thumb I'm wainting for her,
It's near september,
Uncold was the sorrow,untold was the pain.
I will go in my tomb and pray for my lonelyness.
The suddenly the nymph appears,the girl with lips like morphine...
That will make me happy,will rescue me,I need more and more..."

These lyrics were wrote with blood on a wall,near her bed...
After that she pushed him on the bed and....

and the next tomorrow I think,......
(daca nu intelegeti sa imi ziceti si pun in romana,si imi spuneti cum vreti in romana sau in engleza)

Moderator Data inscrierii: 31/Mai/2008 Mesaje: 873

wow...imi place tare mult povestea...asteptam poze cu personajele
si...mijto cu castelul...bn k a gasit pe cnv kre sa o inteleaga
si sa nu o creada o ciudata
hmmm...kiar e vampir?
oricum...misto inceputu
vreau next :w00t:

This is Johanna:

The boy,the pair,you will know his name later:

Moderator Data inscrierii: 31/Mai/2008 Mesaje: 873

imi place de fata...si mai ales de el :wub:

personaje misto...haide sisule cu nextu :w00t:

vrem sa vedem ce se mai intampla :mbounce:

I LIKE IT

Ce proasta's yo deabea a acum am vazut ca ai inceput un fic nou .....deci e sooper tare....si tipa e asa de dark si de misterioasa.....si tipu e tare de tot... :love:

si povestea....hmmm vampir?!mm ....poate vine sa ma muste si pe mine :fun:

castel?De mult mi-am dorit sa intru intr-un castel maaaaareeeeeeeee....si vechi ..... :yes:

deci ficu' e sooper seezu la fel si versurile .....deci astept next :blush:

....

deci in cea mai mare parte am inteles!
soooper ficu...chiar imi place.... :love:

tu mereu ai idei originale... :yes:

deci soooper interesant...

saraca fata...parintii ei au divortat...
iar mama ei traieste cu cnv doar pt bani, faima etc :thumbsdown:

hmmm...vorbeste cu o persoana invizibila...
ce tare...
are prieteni imaginari...
dar care defapt exista, dar destul de departe de ea :w00t:

tare...

ioi...toata omenirea se teme de ea...
dc?
doar pt k asculta rock si se imbraca in negru? :unsure:

wow...e defapt vampir...ce tare :w00t:

a cumparat un castel in Germania...si s`a mutat acolo :thumbsup:

a cunoscut un baiat :shifty:

si s`au indragostit :love:

ce versuri dragutze :X:X:X :love:

NEXT sisu!!! :yes:

apps...si personajele is sooooper dragutze :wub:

Moderator Data inscrierii: 01/Iun/2008 Mesaje: 851

bah sis...deci..in primul rand..imi cer scz de marea mea inarziere... :blush:

sh in al 2 lea rand...ficu asta e bestial.. :love:

deci...e kiar f zweetha johanna sh baiatu ala...dap... :blush:

hm...a cumparat un castel in Germany...
mishto...hm...
un boy... :shifty:

hm...se indragostesc... :love:

hm...sh maiksa...dap..tarfulitza...sa plece doar t faina..mi s'ar parea tare nashpa..
ma rog...

hai cu nextu...k e mishto thare ficu... :blush:

pai umm....ce sa zic...in mare parte e real...ce se intampla cu ea...si sa stiti ca Johanna din Germana este Ioana din romana... :whistle:

....sa mai posteze cnv dupa mn si aveti next....dar vreau sa stiu.....vreti in engleza sau in romana?

EDIT: nu mai am nici timp nici chef sa scriu acum....scriu maine....

Admin Data inscrierii: 31/Mai/2008 Mesaje: 194

deci nu mai am cuvinte esuperb si da tine-l in englezaa ca nu strica nimanui :thumbsup:

vampirs
i like it
si versurile sunt fantastice

Moderator Data inscrierii: 01/Iun/2008 Mesaje: 851

pai...pt mn e ok sh in english...
nush...depinde de altele...nu de mn...

hm...sh maine sper k pui next...
:-"
;)) :thumbsup:

ok....the next....

And started kissing him....she was totaly inlove.....she trusted him as he trusted her......but when she started kissing him on his neck.....she bit him....she needed blood.....he was surprised.....when he descovered that his girl is a vampire....after that he told her his name....ALEX...
j:so.....I'm sorry for biting you....but I was hungry.....
a:I can't belive that you didn't told me anything......
j:how could I???.....HI! I like you but remember I'm a vampire???
a:no...but....you suck my blood.....
j:If I sucked all your blood you were probably inconcious....or dead maybe....
a:damn it......how can I be a vampire too????
j:you can't.....I just wanna tell you that I'm sorry for being so selfish.....
a:look.....just....ah.....I don't want to talk with you now...I don't feel good....
j:becouse the poison is spreading into your body....I totaly forgot to tell you that I'm poisoning while I'm bitting.....
a:what?
j:yes....but you will be alright...it's not so much poison....now all you need is to rest....
Johanna has lots of powers.....when is fool moon she has lots of powers...
So she......

the next tomorrow... :thumbsup:

uh...cool ^_^

Johanna is amaizing! she bought her own castle! can i come there too? pls ;;) :innocent:

oh, so she met a boy? uuuuuuuuuuu nice ^_^ (the boy :wub:

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uh, the lirics are absolutely ...great! i can't find an word that would describe them than "perfect"
"a:no...but....you suck my blood..... " you suck (my blood)- well, thanks god that she sucked BLOOD

So she...... so she what????

pls next!